Aww goran, it was so heartfelt and sad! it was beautiful though just like all your other poems. i loved it. beautiful, great job

Hmm. The poem itself isn't your best work, but the emotion put into was true, and I felt it all.

Aww :'( sad sad poem bas dast xosh i really likeds it n i hope tat person keeps the promise :P talk to yea soon.

Oh, I liked how you organized this poem in such a fine structure. I only have complaints about the need for tightening up of certain lines, in order to augment the poem's flow. But, other than that, I find this work of yours rather terrific and endearing. What a loving friend you are, indeed!

Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

Debbie

Good poem glad i took you deal
5/5
how could it get anything less.

Great poem 5/5.

It was so sweet. if only every guy would like to take a girls pain away. the way you worded it was perfect. i loved the way the structure was. nicely penned. 5/5