I LOVE THIS POEM!! IT IS SOOO TRUE AND I AM SURE EVERYONE CAN RELATE!

This one is good, i give it a 5

Flawless!!! such strong emotions!!

Lies deceit and broken promises, ouch they all hurt you showed your strong emotion ,you are an awesome writer keep up the good work.

Lol...I don't see any horns under that halo from what I've read and seen...I was beginning to wonder if you were ever going to put any up...you are very good and I'm not just saying that...and it appears that people would agree with me lol...I would ask if you need advice, but I usually wait for people to ask lol...anyways I love the poem very strong...kinda brings back some feelings of my own,,,anyways I don't have yahoo IM but I do have myspace IM...if you have a myspace you can search for anthony rorick...or my email which is seeker_of_truth2007@yahoo.com
I'd like to keep in touch if that's cool...nice people are generally difficult to meet, but anyways ttyl...PEACE> and keep up the good writing lol