Like a buffet

by Tylor   Jul 2, 2007


My heart is racing,
Nothing can go wrong,
My nerves are jumpy,
I feel so strong.

My hands are holding,
Yours in mine,
Feels so good,
Sends chills through my spine.

Nothing can compare,
To these feelings of love,
This means everything,
It's all I think of.

Having you with me,
Is all I'll ever need,
I'd give anything,
To have this succeed.

You are my world,
From the ground to the sky,
You are more than perfect,
You just defy.

My love, I send you,
Every second of the day,
Take all you want,
Its like a buffet.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow once again great poem i loved the last line very original 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KIMMY

    I love this one!!! it is great for any one!!!! it should be a hallmark card!!lol!

  • 16 years ago

    by N.Lee

    Awww so cute! LOL but good poem

    please comment some of my work

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    That's adorable.

    I was curious as to how you were going to connect 'love' with a 'buffet'. It was a really good idea to name the poem that, because it got me hooked before I even opened it.

    I thought that it rhymed nicely, and was overall very sweet. And thumbs up to you; that was an original twist on a common topic.

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