The whole future wanna be wife thing got me. awesome poem.

your servant:
david

That was awesome. Well done, it's awesome when you can write poems like that so well done. I really liked it!

Niice poem!
heres my fav part:
Come near me again and you'll see,
That that move was unwise.
A precious best friend of mine,
Is now a person much despised.
i like it.
great job!!!!
~*~Skye~*~

Wow very deep....and i love the rythme of it....5/5