I liked the simplicity of this poem. I particularly liked the idea behind the second stanza- very philosophical. It flowed smoothly, and although it didn't have the strongest ending, I rather enjoyed it. Nice job.

This is a sweet poem. il ike this a lot!!

"If one's never known happiness, how can one be sad?"

I love that line, it really gets me thinking!

Very simple but i got the felling upon it...
as if i were you!!! nice one girl... iloved it!!! take care!!!

Pretty good job, i iked it

your servant:
atticus

No it aint rough i love it!!!