No regrets.. cause you once made me SMILE

by N.Lee   Jul 3, 2007


Do i miss you?
of course!

do i love you?
no doubt!

can you change for the better?
i don't know...
you've tried... and failed

i let go of insecurities
and unveiled my PRIDE

but still i felt as though our love had died

i messed with others...but no one had compared to you
i guess that was a way of showing our love was true

thought i was over you
done with the late night phone calls
reminiscing over how we once stayed on the phone,fell asleep then would ask... "are you sleep" both of us lying saying NO <smile>

i miss everything about you
your laugh your smile
i even miss your numbers i use to dial

we argue then make up
laugh && then someone eventually cries

i put some people over you once in my life
but i learn from my mistakes
meaning i wont make it twice

i thought our love faded away
but it didn't
cause we promised that it would always stay

I'm keeping my promise to you
forever i love you
forever I'm by your side
even if you lied and i cried
babe I'm down to ride...

***______ i LOVE YOU***_______

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  • 15 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Its not a great "poem" but i love it x

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Lovely.
    i really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    A four! I really like the imagery in it. Minor mistakes but nothing huge. My favorite line is i miss everything about you
    your laugh your smile
    i even miss your numbers i use to dial
    That rhyme is a good one. Now we all know it's hard to stay away from rhyming true and you because it's been used so many times it's almost corny but I do that too. Now if you have a bunch of other good rhymes to back it up you can get away with anything. Try to read others poetry and see their style and experiment with it. You could do really well. Good luck!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor

    Actually, i really like this poem.. keep coming back to it haha.. i love it :).. fantastic.. my favorite :D..
    -Tylor

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor

    Pretty sad :(.. but i love it :)