Comments : Keep holding on

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was good a little iffy transition 4.5 loved the write

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Thie piece was well thought of, i thought it was beautifully written and you expressed the emotion in your words perfectly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Another great piece. I find it to be very unique as to what others have mentioned.
    But I was expecting more. Still a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    It was good but there was to much rhyming and tht doesnt really work in this poetry technique 4/5 for a good poem but to many rhymes

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww! so sweet. I love this poem. I think it was very cute and beautiful. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Beautiful. Could feel your emotions clear, loving warm and cute and same time being scared. Touching.
    Also, I liked the structure, very interesting, and it flowed great for me. Many can relate to this.
    Amazing write.
    5/5 Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow i loved it
    it wuz very sweet
    5/5
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