Hmmm.. your belief that you are giving everything to one person. I lykd how u explain wat it is to give everything to someone to offer yourself to someone.
loved it! 5/5
a beautiful piece of poetry

"With love and passion; Truth.
With emotions and blissfully bliss.
I'll give you my heart; Ever So,
To wish; Pray, you take of this."

Sam,

Gah!! That was beautiful. I'm envious. You truly have a way with words... :] You should def. win the club contest with this one. 5.5 Fantastic job on this one. Iloveit.

- Steph <3

Great Poem. Very lovely. 5

Awwwwwwwww how cute <3ed it!

I don't if I showed be jealous of your way with words, or your incredible devotion. I love it.
:]

Wow ur poem was sweet and really nice
5/5

Truly amazing. You have a way of writing in a way that sounds memorizing. You have a true talent, something other people would die for. Keep up the great work.

~Ashley

U have an amazing poem right here!!
and i just loved it:D
u hv a wonderful way with words
keep it up
tk care
breex

The idea is good, and the writing is fine.. but somewhere you didnt pull it off, try and play with the words abit more, dont be afraid of writing more.. dont get me wrong your a good writer and I liked it, but something is missing.. 3 / 5
God bless
Arun

Excellent writing, but I didn't feel a lot of flow and rythym. Maybe it's just me. But it had nice depth.

Great job...once agian...

Cool...a different style of writing, I like that, keep up the gud work...^^