But it's what you wanted,
And I have to accept that.

Never got to say goodbye,
I'll always regret that,
`It kind of ruined it for me when you used that so soon T_T I don't know, when I read it, it just didn't sound right .

Overall, it was over average . Not absolutely great ! But it was pretty good . I think the ending was superb . It shows happiness in sadness all the same .
Nicely done .
..__MiNDYY

I did enjoy reading this piece although I think you need to change a word such as "coz" too because as the slang really throws readers off when reading. Other then that minor thing I found this piece to be quite hopefully, happy yet sad at the same time mixed together so I really did like the emotions you portrayed here. Well done ~mel