Comments : Writing

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Short yet effective and powerful piece.
    I like it's simplicity. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lostsoul13

    I feel the same way. i express my thoughts and feelings into my writing. and it helps to ease the pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a very heartfelt and emotional write, technically the repeat of "joy' in the 4th and 5th line kinda throws it off, but it still makes sense and it is the meaning and emotion that makes this piece so strong. I can relate is my writing, my poems, my words are what I feel from the heart and I can see you are coming from the same place. This is a good, honest poem saturated with emotion.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka