Comments : Real friends are forever (Rondeau).. Edited

  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    I really enjoyed this lovely poem, and it's so true about real friends, keep up the great work
    Phil

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Thats really nice poem...Im really dnt know abt Roundou.but really nice .
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    To be honest this is a good poem. you can make it flawless by doing some work on it.

    Here is some suggestions

    They are always helping you with your issue

    Make this line little short, for example They always help with your issue

    Again work on the line And stay friends for much longer then a month or two

    check for syllable count to make it flow well. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This doesn't deserve to be down voted!

    It was simple with it's words but the tone and pure gratitude from the words gave it all the depth it needed, well done!