No offense, but if you really are 12, why would u write about this, i mean seriously, are u sure that u didnt copy right this, b cuz it seems a little mature, espeacially the "drinking" part, next time u plageris maybe u should make it seem ur age

This is the most unusual love poem I believe I have ever read The pain of rejection is quite natural. This poem reflects an extreme reaction that I somewhat found to be entertaining yet it seemed to be written in pain. Great rhyme scheme 5/5>>>>>>

Wow. i dont know what to say, i didn't really like it, unless it was made up sort of thing, but i don't know if you've lived through this coz your profile says you 12, and it seams a little to extreme, but it was an ok poem if it was made up.

I really liked it. It has a nice flow to it and was a good read. I gave it a 5/5.