Most likely when we think that love will last forever, it is cut short.
when people think it wont last long- it last a little longer- but then that to will be cut short because of lack of trust an beleif.
so in the end what is there left to do but hope, or never fall in love at all?
lol I thought this was a very nice poem
'will I always love you?'
but I think that is not the question.
if you love, then you love.
I think the question (for me) that comes to mind would be
' will you love me?'

great job 5/5

"And I completely fall in sorrows,"

that doesnt...i dont know how to put it, its not gramatically correct (to be the english teacher here)...maybe try changing it into "fall into sorrow"..its a nice line other than that though

"My hair will gray, my legs will thin"
another line that isnt grammatically correct, but you know what? it works..i dont know why, the hair will grey part..its not a verb but it works as one

great work on this poem!

Hey great poem keep it up

Amazing >3333 It's my favorite poem. 5/5

This is such a good poem & sometimes I ask myself the same things
"When your love hurts me inside
and every thing seems blue.
I talk with my silence,
Will I always love you ?"
I love these lines. great work.

I will always love you! i thought this poem was outstanding, it took my breath away. once i read the first stanza my mind and heart were completly engaged in what you had to say. andi would like you to remember that no matter how you feel i will always love you, if you will always love me! again, spiffing poem.

This is a good poem
i like it
however... its not ur best.
i like ur style of writting.
keep up the good work
.xx

This poem made me speechless, now this is wat hapen u love someone a lot, well great work, 5/5

In the noises of this world,
among thousands of people,
I am all alone.
And wondering,
will I always love you?

Hassan, this is superb piece which makes the reader ponder at different parts of this piece and the question is very provoking in this piece. I loved this stock of stanzas and i can feel the grief within you.

Well deserved 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Great poem.
Very emotional.

" When your love hurts me inside
and every thing seems blue.
I talk with my silence
Will I always love you? "

My favourite stanza.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Superbly written poem. I like it very much. Flow is excellent and you created great atmosphere. This piece is also very emotional. 5/5

This is really amazing!! Will u give me some pointers?? Well wonderful job!! Keep it up!!
destiny

Great poem i really enjoy it

Wow you are an amazing poet....i loved this poem...it was amazing i got the chills when i read it...good job...i'm looking forward to read some more of your work...don't ever stop you are amazing...

Really beautifull poem,

Your this poem is very Immotional... I enjoyed .... Keep It Up..:) 5/5

I LOVE YOUR POEM!!!! it makes me think of my ex-love....

"When your love hurts me inside
and every thing seems blue.
I talk with my silence,
Will I always love you ?"

I like this stanza.. I could feel the hurt and love at the same time. that though asking at the last line.. answer would surely be postive..

great piece of work. Loved It!

Really really do like it!!

Hehehe... keep it up!

Always inspire us with your beautiful poems!

Have a great day!

I love ur work its so sweet