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Hey - love the repetition of "will i always love you" - it really makes the poem flow!!!

Oops! this is the 1st poem I've read of yours man and lets me tell- its tremendous- to give some reasons 1, your exression are brilliant and thats is some of the things I also now ask myself- 'will I always love you?' Furthermore, I like the most your third stanza there its fantastic- and then everything- nice poem.

Very nicely done! Keep up the great work! You are really good. :D

Beautiful poem- full of emotions wowo great !!! 5/5

I'm sure you still while. Nice poem.

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Very interesting and very deep poem, great job! :) I'm sure many readers can relate to this poem at one time or another.

Waw sooooooo great i love it,

This poem woke a lot inside of me.. I was thinking "will I always love him?" Yes, that's a good question but unfortunately we have no answers. Or maybe. it can be better we don't know.. If we would know about the future...for example..he will die in car accident and some years later we will fall in love with somone.. Could we still love the person in the moment we would know all this?

We humans are so weak and imperfect. And yes, sometimes we just stop loving someone..it is so cruel..

But one Love is forever. Love towards to Allah.. Days will turn to months and months will turn to year and we still are loving him..

This was very thoughtful poem. I can see how much emotions and effort you have put on it. It is great...or better word...Excellent. This is one of my favourite poems.

You did a good job in expressing the feelings of this poem
keep up the good work