This is avery powerful dark poem that invoked a lot of thought and emotion in me. I am sorry anyone would have to live like this

Loved this poem.
it was really touching for me because that's almost what my life is like.
minus the beach house and designer clothes..
and instead of a brother for me it was a friend.
so this poem i really enjoyed reading,
great words,
clean and to the point.
you're an amazing writter.
just on mistake and that was at the end the word "there" was the wrong one.
but no big deal.

Rather pointed. Words that're not flowery but straight-forward, to the point, and no nonsense gives this piece its power. Strangely I've written something vaguely similar about not knowing how that other person's life might not be better...can't remember what it's called though. Moving on. In a way I kinda think you don't need the two last lines but whatever it does work. Nice write and topic. Love how the words are simple yet effective.
~Faith-less

I really liked it. It was in fact very strong and very deep. Filled with emotion that most would have to experience themselves. The only critique (and don't think I'm being mean cuz I don't want to come off that way, I have a lot to work on myself) I have to make is that you're telling a story more than writing a poem, and yes, stories are very good to tell in poems, but you still need to hold the poems stability, keep a solid flow is all. But you're very creative and have a lot of talent, keep it up.
<3Raych

Thanks for the comment on my poem.

Good poem i felt like a was reading a story

Kels, kels...your writing moves me so much i have to hold back tears...sweety u know i will always be there for u ok...i love your writing cos u bring them from your heart...so beautiful...i miss u and keep writing...pls don't hurt yourself ok...i give this 5