Excellently written poem filled with emotions. You created great imagery through it, and the whole piece holds a lot of sadness.
Great job, 5/5.

I KNOW OF THIS PERSON you speak of
my wife keeps waiting for the old cy to
appear i just don't know after all the drugs i did if he's in me I hope so i miss him too'
so i can say without a doubt this poem
rocks. YOU KNOW WHat you're talKING
about
but most importanly I RELATE CY 5/5

Wonderful piece, and i was just wondering who joe is....

Joes my dad.

Great poem, Loved it.

Good. Guess that's all I have to say. 5/5

Very good :)

I like this poem.. Thanx for the comment on my commandments