Wow that's really good! thanks for sharing

T.e.r.i.a
I cannot remember ..
the last time I read your work.
Well, I missed out on a lot I can see.
This poem was dripping with emotions..
I loved every single word.
I don't think I can possibly even begin..
to tell you what I disliked..
there isn't anything that I didn't like.
Wonderfully written babe <3
Overall Rating: 4.8/5

I really liked it alot, there
was a lot emoiton
coursing through
all of this
and the rhyming was ok
but at a part or two
the rhyming seemed
a little forced
but it flowed
well
5/5

Oh wow your vocab is excellet. choice of words was good. flow was flawless keep it up! :)

Thats true eventually we grow out of every thing, well not every thing.
where's Newborn by the way?
I liked it- but what was 'they come and go just like you used to' about?
he comes and goes?just like that?
lol i'm sorry, it was a lovely poem!

Rather moving..we all have felt this.