This is such a great poem.the flow was great.you are an excellent writer.

Wow. it was a great poem, everything was great, the flow, the structure. couldn't find anything wrong with it. 5/5

Wow, this one is also great. I like the ending very much. Your wording is excellent and topic is really good. 5/5

That was awesome. i hope it won the contest. if it didn't then that mo fo must have been rigged! 5/5!!!!

Your poem was great.. i understand the feelings behind this. very simple words but alot of emotions and its aggressice. i loved theway you have expressed it.

and i decide to give you 5/5. becoz your writing style force me to give you 5.

take care

I really really like this poem i can completly relate to it my favorite line is
i always felt
like i had something to prove
Keep on writing this was really good

This flowed very well, i thought it was beautiful. It was sad and powerful, full of emotion. i loved every line, i also loved the structure of the poem
keep writing
love Tara-Kay
x

Hmmm...

The simplicity makes it interesting,
But.. it starts out one way and turned in the middle...

Which made it even more interesting.

I'd givei t a 5.0/5

Excellent. That's pretty much all I can say lol, just very good.
5/5
Love the rhymes

Good poem. I loved the structure. I think the flow was a bit shaky but it got better towards the end. The rhyming was good though and I liked your choice of words in this poem. I also think you should capitalize your "I's". 5/5

-Shannon <3

I liked this poem alot. i feel the same way.. i think u should make the poem more put together with the stanzas tho.. n not draged out so much cause it would look better. but besides that great poem. 5/5