This is a cute poem. i like how you have put it together. it had a good rythem to it. good work :) and welcome to the site hope you have fun

I really liked this man, 5/5 good job

Aw.....okay time to be serious-I shouldn't joke about being serious...I found the imagery quite well done. This is definitely an interesting write about nature and one that I enjoyed reading. Flow's smoothly and progresses well. Some choice words that heighten the imagery. Nicely done...seems to give off a calming effect if that makes sense.
~Faith-less

I like you poem... keep writting

Thank you all for taking the time to read and review my work :-D
All comments are highly appreciated!