Not bad at all..4/5

I loved it. i can totally related to it too.

good job

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I like every stanza except last one. It is good poem with powerful wording.
5/5

So sad i know the feeling...

5/5

laura

Awww well done

but i agree with one of the commenters above me i think the last stanza needs re wording

That was a great poem and it shows a complete other side to your writings...kepp it up great as always

I loved the poem. It was nice how you showed the love and emotion and the longing and wondering for it being suddenly lost.

I loved the poem. It was nice how you showed the love and emotion and the longing and wondering for it being suddenly lost.

I loved the poem. It was nice how you showed the love and emotion and the longing and wondering for it being suddenly lost.

5/5
great job
i loved it

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This is so cute I love it. I love how a guy can be so sensitive. I feel like you really miss this girl. And sorry I haven't been on latly to read your stuff. <3