Comments : Butterfly Wings

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow very powerful language use in this poem, keep it up xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by jojo88

    I like ur poem and thanks for commenting on my poem it maeds a lot

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Actually i nice version of my poem..this was another lovely poem on how you describe your feeling using symbols were great and imaginative..smooth flow too.

  • 11 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I think this is one of the best I've read. The elegant choice of words and deepness of each line. Soul captivating and very intimidating.

    Flying away on delicate innocence,

    To the dark where it shall once and for all

    Be torn apart,

    And I shall love No More.

    I liked this part very much.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nix

    It is hard to read this poem, you could write this piece in stanzas then it will be easier to read. Anyway this is great poem, atmosphere is incredible and some lines are very powerful. You described emotions excellently and every line is touching. It deserves 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    So elegant and beautiful...great work!!!!!