Comments : Tear Up My Life

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    THATS VERY GOOD AND SHOWS A LOT OF POWER IN THIS WRITING, WELL DONE XXX

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Good choice of words, very powerful piece. You expressed emotions in it very well.

    -Tear my life up like a piece of paper,
    And throw it all away,
    That's all you ever thought of me,
    So I waste away my day.-
    ^ My favorite stanza.

    Well done, keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Jul

    Awesome job! 5/5
    vocab chosen was perfect for this piece..

    p.s. thnks for the comment on my poem too :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Nix

    Third and first stanzas are great. Superb poem with extraordinary wording. It is unique and it has very interesting and good atmosphere.
    Ir really deserves 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    Wow...i havent read any poems that i could relate to as well as i could to yours. i loved a guy sooo much and he knew it. well at the 8th grade dance i saw him dancing with someone and i looked him straight in the eyes. he looked back at me but it was as if he was looking right through me. it tore me up inside and ever since ive been useing poetry to ease my throbbing heart. i loved this poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ixora

    OOo wow this is perfect for what i wanted to say to a certain someone...espeically this stanza:

    Throw my tears down the drain,
    Just as the rain will do,
    You were never worth an ounce of me,
    But my love for you was true.

    But amazing poem, you are truly a uniqe talent here.

    *^*crow*^*

  • 11 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Oh what else can i say? this was stunningly beautiful and it was a gloomy poem..i know how it feels. I love every words that you were saying i can feel it really.. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    The choice of words were simple but portrayed deep meaning. I liked the way the poem rhymed and the lines were tight enough which made it flow freely. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Good write 5 out of 5