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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats short but very poweful, i think the length you have wrote works very well for this write. well done xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Nice one .. i like it a lot ..keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    I like the concept of being there, but also not, like people looking but not noticing, hearing but not listening, it was beautiful, and nice and short xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by CHANGED

    Sad but you are seen by the ones who see and care to see