Comments : A Lesson Learnt (((CONTEST)))

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Wow, awesome stuff
    you have such a lot of talent!!!
    5/5 defo!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Awesome poem. you write really well and the flow was great. keep on writin. 5/5

    -daniel

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Awesome poem..
    the flow was just right.
    good choce of words too.
    keep it up. :)