Comments : Killing Me Softly

  • 12 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    A deep emotion filled piece of writing. It has great length to it like there was not going to be an end. All in all very well written...

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This piece is deep and greatly written. I like the way you write, you put so much emotions in your poems.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -You said you did it in private
    Secretly consuming your addiction
    Your body, soul, mind you did desecrate
    You caused so much affliction-
    ^ very captivating
    The imagery in whole poem is superb.
    Well done, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nix

    The last stanza is greatest. Well done this peace is excellently written. Six stanza is also superb. Your vocab is incredible, and you have big talent. Again, wall done really deserves 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Thanks for the comment! This poem you have here shows so much depth and meaning! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by David

    First of all i loved the title, it drew me to read this poem. the poem itself was excellently planned and perfected. it was awesome!

    the sadness was evident and gave the poem a deeper meaning and effect.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    I loved your last stanza the most, left me wanting more. that wat i look for in poems, and this was excellent and simply stunning.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Wow this was really creepy though i've read lots of poems something like this.. nice description and imaginationbut i really liked the most is the first part coz i can somehow relate on it..keep it up!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    A well written piece, makes me wonder what it feels like. You really expressed what you feel perfectly and the like it that way.

  • 11 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    "and I like it that way." (Sorry)

  • 11 years ago

    by Alissa

    This poem was really good, I loved the emotion, the flow was good through most of the poem and the rhymes were flawless. You did fantastic, I could feel my heart pounding till the end. You did fantastic.

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow...very dark and well written...i love it ! Keep up the great wrok!!!!!!!!!! 5/5