A deep emotion filled piece of writing. It has great length to it like there was not going to be an end. All in all very well written...

This piece is deep and greatly written. I like the way you write, you put so much emotions in your poems.
My favorite stanza is:
-You said you did it in private
Secretly consuming your addiction
Your body, soul, mind you did desecrate
You caused so much affliction-
^ very captivating
The imagery in whole poem is superb.
Well done, 5/5

The last stanza is greatest. Well done this peace is excellently written. Six stanza is also superb. Your vocab is incredible, and you have big talent. Again, wall done really deserves 5/5.

Thanks for the comment! This poem you have here shows so much depth and meaning! 5/5

First of all i loved the title, it drew me to read this poem. the poem itself was excellently planned and perfected. it was awesome!

the sadness was evident and gave the poem a deeper meaning and effect.

5/5 David

I loved your last stanza the most, left me wanting more. that wat i look for in poems, and this was excellent and simply stunning.

5/5 David

Wow this was really creepy though i've read lots of poems something like this.. nice description and imaginationbut i really liked the most is the first part coz i can somehow relate on it..keep it up!!

A well written piece, makes me wonder what it feels like. You really expressed what you feel perfectly and the like it that way.

"and I like it that way." (Sorry)

This poem was really good, I loved the emotion, the flow was good through most of the poem and the rhymes were flawless. You did fantastic, I could feel my heart pounding till the end. You did fantastic.

Wow...very dark and well written...i love it ! Keep up the great wrok!!!!!!!!!! 5/5