This piece is deep and greatly written. I like the way you write, you put so much emotions in your poems.
My favorite stanza is:
-You said you did it in private
Secretly consuming your addiction
Your body, soul, mind you did desecrate
You caused so much affliction-
^ very captivating
The imagery in whole poem is superb.
Well done, 5/5
Wow this was really creepy though i've read lots of poems something like this.. nice description and imaginationbut i really liked the most is the first part coz i can somehow relate on it..keep it up!!
This poem was really good, I loved the emotion, the flow was good through most of the poem and the rhymes were flawless. You did fantastic, I could feel my heart pounding till the end. You did fantastic.