Omg i loved it and its my type of poem so GREAT JOB!!!!
good luck
~Taz~

Hey great poem lots of emotion i know lots of people can relate to this poem good job im glad i read it good job again

keenan

Very beautiful poem with nice wordings and great flow. This is a very mournful piece which I really loved. The mistake I found is in the line "So me broken heart would be whole" it must be my not me. Nevertheless 5/5

Fsams

Know exactly how you feel!
I loved this poem, flow wasnt great at places, but it was a good poem overall and i could relate so well
love Tara-Kay
x

The rhyming was pretty good
i think you should probably work on syllabol count though
otherwise this poem was fantabulous
great work
4/5

The rhyming was greta the flow was good! 4/5 it was beautiful!

Very good! I love your way with words!

A few f the longer lines disrupted the flow a bit. Other than that it was a very nice read. Keep it up! 5/5

marcella

Another fine written piece by you. I think you did a great job on this one. You have one mistake though..

I am sad and (think)
Of how you've caused me so much pain
=thinking - also adding 'ing' enhances the flow =)

Keep writing my friend.

It lacked as bit of flow but ws otherwise really good 4/5 for good work but not enough flow

Thats a good poem.
It was sad, but then towards the end you show hope of moving on.
I loved it.
keep writing your good, really!
=]
5/5
xoxo
--Chelsey

Rlly good 5/5 :]
~halie~