Wow thats deep but 5/5 from me =)

I like it, it reminds me on a voice inside my head(ha ha) Great wording, you did superb job on this one. 5/5

Wow very creative in the violent death kinda way =] great job me like
5/5
laura

For some reason I LOVE IT
!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS FREAKIN AWSOME!!!!!!!!
50/50/50/50/50/60

The rhyme here was unexpected, possibly because of the layout of the poem, but i really liked it, it was a good read and excellently done, 5/5! xxx

Wow. i liked this. it was slightly scary and the rythmn went well with it. 5/5.

Woah violently superb...i am hoping that this is not a reflection of your life however???

Heeey! Yes i like this poem..it has a lil something something. Good rhythm...scary topic..but its in the 'dark' section so i have no reason to complain..and you are a very dark kinda person -wink-

I thought i'd better comment on at least one of your poems for being such a sweetie to me.
Xx Chrissie

It's the truth about life, like you have to kill to look out for yourself. Just neccesarily what I'm usually into but yeah. I got my own meaning out of it.

I'm sacred... But I really liked that poem. It kept me interested too say the least, and I think it was just the right length. 5/5

~Ravyn

Seriously awesome dude...loving all your poems another 5/5 from me =)

WAHAO.. the title only told me im gonna like this one...and it was rite...superjob

5/5

~Wake~

Hey! It's been a while huh? I like this one.