HOLY SHIIIITT!!!
That's amazingg!!!
That is seriously my favourite.
You're poems are getting better and better =]

"Even though you cannot see it,
His presence lingers in all of us,"

...and we surely can feel its presence. =]

Methought it was quite endearing and enjoyable to read; plus, such myth that you've mentioned on this piece have fairly intrigued me. Ha.

'twas nicely written, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.

~Marian.

Well it was a okay poem for me xD I really like the title of the poem, it really stands out. Good job. Flow was smooth :)

Awwwwwwww!! you are such a cutie!!!
lol hold me!!
this poem is adorible!! seriously... it made me feel loved just reading it :)
good job.. i love it
<3 ang

Awehh, I loved this. I loved the whole overall idea of using a ghost as a symbol for love..makes sense, you can`t see a ghost but you can feel it, technically the same idea with love. So I liked the use of a symbol...it helps to show off your talent a little more. Your lines in your poems are really short, but they`re so full of description so it`s easy for the reader to know what you`re talking about.

5.5
:]

So i made an exception to my own rules shout me. you have beautiful poems and i wanted to read more. this is just another one
love your poems
5
:~)Sam

Wow i love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yo sereusly did an amasoming job

They named this ghost love,
Because of his undying care and trust,
Even though you cannot see it,
His presence lingers in all of us,
^^^
Loved this part!
Just like the "ghost" we can not see love but it is there deep inside of all of us ...

I can help you see your inner ghost,
Just let me hold your hand,
You will find love,
Sooner then you planned
^^^
This ending is sweet and touching. You have painted a picture in my mind of a man holding out his hand to the one he adores .... pleading "take a chance and grab my hand" "just give us a chance and love will do the rest"

A very enjoyable read ....
Thank you for sharing your words
Luanne