Whoa...this poem is so raw and has alot of deep emotions runing through it..i luv it:D
yet i can relate to it so easily...since i now find it hard to give my heart up to someone becuz its been broken b4...well u can say..i have hit rock bottom:D
tk care bree x

I love this poem....check mine leave a comment i will appreciate it

^_^ nice work I loved it!! had really nice flow to it

I dont really like this one to be honest, because you can get so much deeper messages and like, while reading your poetry I get a strong sense that you do have a lot of theories or answers to why t hese things happen...this one just doesnt cut it for me, and i dont think it flows as well as ur other ones, but thats not to say that it is still very good.