Great piece of work you have here.

Although the flow needs to be fixed.

But keep it the way it is.

Always, Good job.

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Yeah this is definitley a really great poem, keep up the good work

Great job on the poem , very good job ,keep it up
your friend Tracy d ................5/5

Very much stirring, let them flourish... 5/5

Nazeer

BEAUTIFUL. LOVEEE. IT. Keep writing...
5/5
-Jackie

Dat was a great poem
thanx 4 leaving comments

`5/5 really awesome the person u wrote this to is a very lucky person

This was really sweet!
Another Good One =D