Comments : Love is a burden (Sonnetic)

  • 16 years ago

    by X2892

    I liked it but not as much as the other 2 but still good , this time 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Funny poem.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aww i liked this poem, it portrayed two sides of love, and was written very well with a good flow! deffinatly a 5/5

    xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This was an enjoyable piece to read. It's simple, but still unique in a way... this was greatly penned, it flowed well and the wording was exquisite. Great work!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Haha cute very good and different 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lesbian hehe

    Love it

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    Hey this one was great!!! keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Lol um...okay. interesting enough.

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Its interesting.. i dont think ive seen this style before but i like it... especially the last stanza. keep it up <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Wow that was great

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    I liked this. Denotes a special kind of wisdom few young adults realize. I'm glad you shared it with the site. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Interesting, though not funny.
    I liked the topic you portrayed, though I didn't get much out of it.

    xTheEcstaysofSuicidex 3.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    It wasn't really funny to me.
    But nonetheless it was an excellent poem.
    You did a good job, and truth rang from each word.
    Actually to me, I thought it was more serious, haha I guess Im weird.

    Another 5/5 From me,as you rightly deserve it.:)
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Aww, that'S a sweetT poeM! I likE iT :)

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    Cute poem once again, not much emotion but cute.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

    luzaN

  • Heh, was pretty funny, you're really talented at writing, well written and flow was spot on.

    5/5 Well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    This is great.
    nice way of explaining what love is and what can happen if you're not careful.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    You are such a good writer. I adore your
    style. I really enjoyed this piece. Continue your writing. I give this a 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Very well written, with an interesting message. i had to read it twice!! nice work!