Love, they said.

by Krystal   Jul 7, 2007


Love, they said, could only end with pain.
But in the end, I purely gained.
I was scared right from the start,
But something about you calmed my heart.
Everything you touched, and everything you did,
Made me feel comforted, even from where I hid.
You took the time to hold my hand,
And took the time to help me stand.
No one understood me quite like you,
And at first I was terribly confused.
The way I felt, from inside your embrace,
Made me feel delicate, like a strip of lace.
I knew I would crumble if you let go,
You whispered to me, and said I should know,
That you loved me now, and would forever so.
Love, they said, could only end with pain,
But in the end, I purely gained.

(I've never written about love, please tell me what you think I should do to make it better...)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow awesome poem. I couldnt tell it was your first time writing about love! you have some talent. keep it up! I'd love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks
    Rachel

  • 16 years ago

    by Insanelyempty

    Thats really sweet. It make me think of the first time I fell in love. Good job.