Comments : The Break Up

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was so sad, very nice style and format and quite unique 5/5 for sure maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Long but worth the read that was emotion filled piece and you did very well to keep the cuplets rhyming through it all

    one thing is on this line
    Hearing about you still makes me fl slightly numb
    i think you meant to say feel slightly numb you might wanna edit that

    :) good job