Comments : Abuse

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    Well, you made it very clear that it is a big deal and your words were loud and proud. Maybe someone will hear you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow truly great description i truly loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    I hope one day all of them , who beat children will be punished!!!
    You make people think about it, and that's great! I love your poems! :)5/5

    *Melody*

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    Tracy rest assured i understand you, i cry when i read some of your poems ,if there was
    no abuse the world would be a better place ,lets put an end to child abuse , report it to the relevant authorities so people dont suffer in silence Steve.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shar

    I agree with all of you!!! Parents, adults or whom ever need to be accountable with hurting another human being...animals too!!! Lets get the word out and make a difference!!! Great job my friend...keep on writing...this is good for you to help you heal. Love you!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    This poem seems to be really trying to drive it home, the complete helplessness and how vunerable children are. I cant imagine anyoone doing it to a child but obviously it happens. Great poem, very straight to the point.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    As everyone already knows, I, myself, am a victem of domestic abuse.

    I was fortunate enough to get out of the situation with my children and I alive. Sadly, not many can victems can or will say that.

    I am glad that you are trying to spread the word. The abuse in our nation must come to an end. It start here, now, today! The end of it starts with you, me, the neighbor, and everyone else in the world.

    It is time that we stand and take back our lives. Living in fear, rage, and even self doubt can no longer be justified or tolerated on any level.

    I would be lying to you if I said that I never wrote about my past experience; however, it is the writing that has allowed me to somewhat heal. Though, I do not think that I will fully heal from the things that I endured without the help of God.

    Thank you so much for taking a stand and doing your part to put an end to this violence.

    --Sher