Great poem 5/5

The flow's a tad off at parts, but it's got some good points to it, and definitely something we can all relate to. Overall it's a good piece! Keep up the good work!
Charisma*

Thumbs up =)

I love da poem so
true....
5/5

Great poem.. keep up the writing..
5/5
[*]BreanN[*]

Totally nicceeee!! Keep it real!!