Even thoguh its under construiction....this short version is still so well penned:d
great flow in it..i cant wait to read some more:D
keep it up bree

I still think its eartfelt and full of emotion..gr8:D

hope theres still more to come:D
keep it up buddy:D:D
tk care breex

Ohh wow..even more deep with emotions and everything!!...
keep up the gr8 work
ur going really good:D
tk care now
x

Ahh yes indeed..it was a gr8 poem....glad that u finished it...hope you can read some of my poems nd comment too plz:D
muchly appreaciated:D
keep it up
bree

This is sooooo sad.... this almost made me cry. This is a very good poem. Nice job.

Very sad, ut exellent poem! 5/5 i couldnt quit reading it... keep it up! ^_^

~*~Skye~*~