Comments : The Devil in a Black dress.

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    The flow of the words was great and the story it tells was always very deep. I liked it very much.
    Your friend
    Lisa Ann

  • 16 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow This was really incredible,great use of words and full of emotion.really enjoyed that!!! thankyou for your comment xlisax

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Incredible and beautiful words. I feel the pain inside your poem.5/5 Love it ;-)

  • 16 years ago

    by NIDAL

    WOW..LOVED THIS POEM...ITS A COMPELING STORY BUT YET A POEM...EXCELLEND AND CAPTIVATING..THE FINAL 2 LINES SUMS UP THE POEM SO NICLEY...ALL AREOUND GREAT WORK 5/5 check out my latest "MY Doubts"

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Deep emotions, good flow.

    " Lady Lisa Sky I wish you the best of fate,
    But after you used me, you just left me with a heart full of hate. "

    Those lines, incredible.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved the ending you used here..very intense.
    I liked the opening, it dragged me right into the piece and from there on it just got better...beautiful work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    The emotional depth was potent here. The subject matter was darkly realistic for someone experiencing addiction.

    My only critisicm: it would make it more clear what feelings you were trying to convey if you proofread this. There are a few errors that give the reader pause trying to sort it out.

  • 16 years ago

    by shenoa

    Great poem, it's a perfect tale of obsession. lady lisa sky.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sad But True

    Both, the drug and the woman, the woman behind the drug.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Wow..i dunno wether to laugh or feel sad..lolz...coz its kinda funny is some ways...although anguish feelings are there..

    lolz..i cant stop laffin..

    but ur poem is simply amazin...good job...tc..