I thought this was really good.. Short and to the point.. Some people cant pull off the short ones but you did it... Sometimes its hard to write them and then pull it all together.. Great job. just one thing though. Maybe if you split the poem up a little bit it would be easier to read and flow a bit better.. anyway 5/5

Your words are different from those of most poems. well written and again colorfull word usage.
the title however confused me a tad bit
4.5/5
but i'll be nice and round up 5/5

This poem is definately amazing because it speaks the truth in so many ways, the words are great and the flow as well. At the end of each day happiness is all we really search for. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

How u describe of your emotions in each lines are very well said..It was beautiful though it was sad too.Keepit up =)

This one wasn't as good as others I've read of yours, but I still enjoyed it. Very well written, and emotional. It kept me thinking. It was smooth and such, though it seemed slightly forced in some places

overall

5/5

Oh my god. it was great, short yet you got the point across so strong. the imagery was strong, the structure was great, and the flow was perfect. great work 5/5

This was really good, you used such strong words to help with the imagery and you did it rightfully so. This poem was exploding with emotions and descriptions that made me love it.

5/5

Loved the meaning to this poem. really enjoyed reading this. deffinitally a 5/5