Promise me one thing

by Emma   Jul 10, 2007


You will never know how much you hurt me. You took away my pride.
Although I picked myself up and got it back on my own, I can never forgive you for not being there when you should have been.
When you could have been the one to tell me that I'm better than this, the one who would wipe my tears away, and make me remember why you were worth it.
I had faith that you would come through but you let me down.
I have realized now that there are people who will go a whole lifetime without doing what you did to me
Do me one favor, promise me this:
Next time you break a girl's heart like you did mine, remember my hurt face and what you put me through.
No one deserves to be treated that way. No one deserves a broken heart

-E. Roush

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  • 16 years ago

    by Krazy

    Again, very good, but try breaking it up into stanzas, it'd be much easier to read, and i think it would flow better.

    You will never know how much you hurt me. You took away my pride.
    Although I picked myself up,
    got it back on my own,
    I can never forgive you for not being there when you should have been.