Great poem that last stanza flowed perfectly excellent job im glad i read it lol:D:D

keenan

The person above me is right, the flow is perfect in the last stanza!! GREAT JOB keep up the good work check out some of my poems, thanx

Very sweet poem about friendship.. cherish it. i rated this a 5

Awww such a cute poem for a friend.. she is very lucky :)
a the poem is awesomly written

Can relate, have a very close friend who is always there.
so yeah, i liked this one, it was sweet and very cute.
well done
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

Its a really good poem.
I can relate..
and the fact that its dedicated to someone makes it seem even more wholesome to me.
I loved it.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey