Comments : HAVE YOU EVER

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow this is a really good poem and i can definitely relate to it all. you did such a wonderful job showing your feelings.
    keep on writing. 5/5
    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the emotions running in this poem, it reminded me of the song 'welcome to my life' Well done :) keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was pretty nice, yet sad at the same time. It reminded me of a poem that I had written once--living in fear and other whatnots make life directionless and gloomy. Awfully saddening to say the least. ~Marian.