Good on you for letting go and taking charge. it will help you heal. well done xoxo

It was a okay poem. Flow was smooth, Just a suggestion to use punctuations :)

Overlooking the grammatical errors, I think this work was rather fine on the whole. What definitely enhanced this piece was the gurgling emotions embedded on it. It's quite nerve-wracking to note how a trusted someone refused to accept the truth. Oh, well, you finished it with a happy ending; I'm glad. Ha. =] All the best and take care, Marian.