I like the beginning stanza but i feel as if the last stanza lacks something. it needs to be more powerful to leave the reader impacted, if you get my flow. however great idea for a poem i know a lot of people will be able to relate.
xoxo

It's an enjoyable poem. The flow was nice, and the idea was good. But the emotion was't too strong. I'll wait your next poem.. :)

I feel sorry for you if this really happened :| Anyway it was simple but straight to the point. Flow was flawless, I really enjoyed reading it.

5/5!

It was simple although the emotions are felt in each word that you let go in the poem.Nice poem.Keep it up

DAMN i would be hurt if that was me and my best friend

This is a good poem in totality. The message is clear in this piece. Add more rhymes and it will be flawless. Tc

Fsams

Wow, you can tell that this had a lot of emotions put into it, you wrote it straight from the heart, you got straight to the point, i liked that. 5/5

This sounds like a poem written
in the spur of the moment
after a fight

and thats when there is so much emotion
in the poem
and it makes it great

nice job

5/5

Awww :(

I have felt like this b4 i can so relate to this stanza
I do everything for you,
I have always been here for you,
But then you treat me like crap.