Comments : The War, The Army

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Hey Keenan I like this one and knowing that it is true makes it even more special...Remeber that noone can tell you what to do..It is all up to you in life you destiny lies in your hands not someone else's.
    Great Job Keep writting!!
    Beck

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Amazing poem....its awesome that u want to do this...

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    I can relate somewhat to this, i was scheduled to go to basic training this winter, i give it a 5/5 keenan!!! goodluck!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Well done with this piece truely a capturing piece writing about your future like that just made this more of an emotional grabbing poem. Keep up the good work Keenan! ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    A salute to the Army men
    and a salute to your spirit
    5/5
    your friend
    Rohan