Comments : Sunset

  • 13 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Omg!!..wow that was amazing....it sounded so lovely...
    "beyond the ocean blue"
    i loved that line!....keep the poems coming!..
    just lovely
    hpe yu will b commenting no my poems too soon hehe
    bree

  • 13 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This is an amazing write, so emotion packed and well thought out,

  • 13 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    Very emotional, great words.
    A wonderful piece of writing.
    Take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    That was really beautifully Done!
    it shows so much love to share n give such a promise simply wowwww!!!!

    God bless u

  • 13 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem steve , great wording and wonderfully written , good job , your friend , Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,,,,5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Aw, so cute!
    Greta

  • 13 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Along the golden sands"

    This line caught my attention the most. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by June

    One word sums it up.......Beautiful!

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    I like it very good

  • 13 years ago

    by Melody

    Aaww this one is so cute....simple....and beautiful....brilliant work....(love is the greatest gift)....wish you all the best....5/5
    *Melody*:)

  • 13 years ago

    by purplified

    That was a truly beautiful poem...keep up the good work =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    :) Great poem, doesn't flow so well, but it's full of emotion. Don't force rhymes ever. :)

    Hey, check your private messages.

  • 13 years ago

    by CATHERINE

    How i wish i can dream like this.
    so far from my reality.
    my man cant marry me bcoz he alread got married.
    but i cant leave him.

  • 13 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This was great

  • 13 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Just a beautiful poem you had written....

    Nazeer with you...

  • 12 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...

  • 12 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
    Check for my new poem'favorite authors' - thanks

    Nazeer

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    WOW!! u have an amazin way in usin ur words
    keep it up
    5/5

    yours,
    ~gIrL~

  • 12 years ago

    by she

    Awsome flow

  • 12 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was beautiful!
    5/5