Omg!!..wow that was amazing....it sounded so lovely...
"beyond the ocean blue"
i loved that line!....keep the poems coming!..
just lovely
hpe yu will b commenting no my poems too soon hehe
bree

This is an amazing write, so emotion packed and well thought out,

Beautiful poem.
Very emotional, great words.
A wonderful piece of writing.
Take care

That was really beautifully Done!
it shows so much love to share n give such a promise simply wowwww!!!!

God bless u

Excellent poem steve , great wording and wonderfully written , good job , your friend , Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,,,,5/5

Aw, so cute!
Greta

"Along the golden sands"

This line caught my attention the most. 5/5

One word sums it up.......Beautiful!

I like it very good

Aaww this one is so cute....simple....and beautiful....brilliant work....(love is the greatest gift)....wish you all the best....5/5
*Melody*:)

That was a truly beautiful poem...keep up the good work =)

:) Great poem, doesn't flow so well, but it's full of emotion. Don't force rhymes ever. :)

Hey, check your private messages.

How i wish i can dream like this.
so far from my reality.
my man cant marry me bcoz he alread got married.
but i cant leave him.

This was great

Just a beautiful poem you had written....

Nazeer with you...

This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
Check for my new poem'favorite authors' - thanks

Nazeer

WOW!! u have an amazin way in usin ur words
keep it up
5/5

yours,
~gIrL~

Awsome flow

This was beautiful!
5/5