Comments : My Story

  • 16 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That's really sad, but simple (in a good way) and really well written. Keep writing! And thanks for your comment on my poem by the way, it was really nice of you. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Good work in few lines. its awesome my friend and i hope that you get happy soon
    your friend
    Rohan
    and ya if you have time do see my poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Happiness, joy, wonderment and glee,
    all of these emotions, they are wasted on me.

    this whole poem is great short but great you captured so much in these few stanzas keep it up

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    I like this, I can well relate to it.
    Also the lay out is good, different from the usual I usually see.
    keep it up, take care x.o.x