Have you ever tryed rhyming
well anyway great poem 5/5

I like it, straght to the point, kind of like the feeling of happiness being gone, its just gone no frills or additional stuff. good job, keep it up.
mollie
p.s. not all poems rhyme, its an expression. i like that this poem doesn't rhyme.

Short and to the point very well written you should check spelling before you upload but otherwise great poem