Comments : That boy

  • 13 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I liked the line

    he was my posion and I need another dose

    that was very vivid and had great connotations, amazing!

    however, i feel that as the poem progressed you ran out of ideas almost. the ending wasn't as powerful as the beginning and i lost interest. on the contrary it was quite raw which was good.

    4/5
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    My my... this is just, a very beautiful poem sweetie! I loved every single line, I can't tell you how well I can relate to this. I had someone just like the boy in this poem, someone that used to hold me so close.. say that he loved me and he meant everything to me. Then out of nowhere he just threw it all away, like I was nothing. Anyways.. this is just an amazingly written poem Elana! It is filled with so much saddness and pain. Great job, please keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~