This was a wonderfull poem

Whoot. Anyone else hot?? lol jk. Ha that was good though. Descriptions were awesome and the ending penned it together nicely. Great job : )

Wow! Chills. I have CHILLS! I have never expierienced a dance with anyone but if I did, this is exactly how I would want it. WONDERFUL!! Makes me want to cry!

sweet_rebellion

Let me just start by saying that the title captivated me. Wow!
but the whole poem was amazing. the imagery is strong..the emotions deep..and the words carefully chosen to represent the passion between the two dancers.
i am taken away by this.
great work! =]
keep it up!
--Viola

That was a great poem...i loved the way you paint the picture out for me...your a great writter...keep it up.

I definitely could see EVERYTHING you described. The image was very clear. I got a very intense feeling from this one. It literally blew me away.
You're amazing.