Hey this was a good poem at least thats what i think keep it up

I like this poem keep it up

Dave this is a deep poem. It's awesome because it speaks of how no matter how hard we try to help someone, the only true person who can help them is... themselves. I love this poem. 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I like this poem .. it's great ...

keep it up =)

Oo i like this, its original and true. I liked the word choice too it is quite straight forward. I'd suggest maybe formatting it a bit more or adding in some more punctuation so its easier to read. Nice write though :)

-ariana

This is a great poem